Ode To An Elm
February 22nd, 2009 | Published in Art, Poetry | 2 Comments
Ode to an Elm
The reigning elm so favored by
the sky greeted the morning
as it did every day
with branches waving excitedly
and lavish leaves wide and gay
Good Morning Sun! Hello Day!
The green leaves danced in
the breeze and shimmered
in the sun’s golden rays
Proud and Tall, content to
be a tree and greet the day
then the men came with
their truck and chipper and saws
i watched them move about
ignorant of my eyes, a job
to do to earn their pay
and work they did like ants
attacking a fallen fly, helpless,
unmoving, now their prey
without thought or hesitation
men climbed the three main trunks
to reach the leaves above
and as they climbed, the tree
shook in fear and confusion
The saws roared to life
with a scream and a buzz
and while a tree can feel
no pain, I could tell with
a sense beyond the five that
that tree cried in hurt as
one by one its branches fell
and when the men finished those
three main trunks stood so
naked, so bare, like arms
reaching to the sky, why?
Oh, why? Like arms with
hands removed, awkward
amputated arms. Why, oh Why?
Then the men stood along a fence
with one foot up and bellies
Hanging over their belts, a
cigarette in hand, admiring
their work. A fine job they
had done, yes-sir-ree
had they left the tree
would have lived, grown anew
branches and flourished again.
I felt it standing there
naked and bare
amputated and mutilated
a skeleton of wood
but still alive though with
pain and confusion
fighting to stay a tree
had they left, only had they left.
When the cigarettes were done
and the one foot came back down
to the ground, the saws revved
and roared once again. Thankful
was i the tree had no ears
two men attacked the trunks
with expressionless faces and
two more fed branches into the
chipper that chopped and shredded
them onto dust, thus the
four reduced this wonder of nature
to bits and pieces and fragments and chips
to be used for pulp to stew into paper
or spread around some garden some day.
And when it was done, their
truck full of mulch, the four
men had indeed earned their pay
now, only a stump is left where for
nearly a century that happy Elm
greeted the day
since before the four men were born
before their grandfathers had anything to say
that proud tree greeted the day
No, nothing of left of that
beautiful Elm except this poem
and the paper it is written on
How i wish there was
Some Other way



February 8th, 2010at 5:52 pm(#)
its very long
February 11th, 2010at 3:04 am(#)
I didn’t find it too long as the line breaks drew my eyes onwards.
I could feel your loss as I read it. Well done on writing a very effective piece!